The right order to read the story

There is one thing I can say I'm happy with is the text in a diamond shape layout in speech bubbles. However, I still need to work on speech bubbles themselves. I got this habit of strickly keeping my speech bubbled within the panel. Even though a lot of comics I have read got speech bubbles that sometimes comes out of the panels and it looks great. 
In my next project, I aim to add at least one speech bubble that will go out of the panel, ink and clolour my piece digitally.For this project, I chose one of the characters from silhouette turnarounds: 'Cruel demon cosplayer'. I picked this one because I was most satisfied with the outcome. I also felt like a cruel demon would fit perfectly in the role of a runaway bride. 
The paper I used was so thin that each time I folded it in a book to check if the panels were in the right place, the edges were getting more and more damage. Luckily, I manage to avoid the risk of pages falling apart by putting the numbers on all pages, unfolding them and working on it this way. 
I decided to use coloured pencils since it's one of my favourite mediums that is also a signature of most of my artwork. Although I am a big fan of coloured pencils, it leaves visible texture. I hope to learn colouring in photoshop during my first year of this course to improve the quality of my artwork and hopefully do my next project digitally.​